[ Oh... That sounds lie something another person in his life might say.
He says anyone, so just plunging in would be too much, but maybe... ]
Why don't you take it in steps then? You could find someone who could give their thoughts on your work. Then you could find an editor... If you can find people who can offer honest critique, then you'll know that your writing is the best that it can be once you share it with others.
You don't have to, but I think it would be nice. I'm not a writer, so I like seeing how other people view the world. It's like watching someone fill in a sketch with color for me, so I'm sure it's the same for others.
[ Though naturally, it's his choice. Dazai isn't here to push either way, and he can only speak to his own thoughts. ]
[Sunny thinks about it. The first person who comes to mind is Aubrey, but...as honest as she is, Sunny thinks she'd probably be biased. Xie Lian would be the same way. If there's anyone he can think of who would give him honest critique above anything else, it would have to be Mr. Erwin...]
i think maybe i know someone that would read it first for me
If you decide to show it to them, let me know. I'd like to hear how it goes. I'd like to hear about your progress.
When you reach the point where you want to share it with the world, I want to be able to read it.
[ If he does. It's not like Dazai is going to judge either way, but there's no sense in thinking of it that way. Write, rewrite, refine - that's how talent is in any field. ]
We should. Your writing can take as long as you need, but our meeting cannot!
I want to hear how you like boba tea, and I want to try the tea named after you. I won't try it until I see you again, so we have to make it happen soon!
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im
not sure
i'd
like to
i think
maybe
but that would
probably
never happen
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even if
my poems were good enough
to be published
i think i'd be
too afraid
to show
anyone
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He says anyone, so just plunging in would be too much, but maybe... ]
Why don't you take it in steps then? You could find someone who could give their thoughts on your work. Then you could find an editor... If you can find people who can offer honest critique, then you'll know that your writing is the best that it can be once you share it with others.
You don't have to, but I think it would be nice. I'm not a writer, so I like seeing how other people view the world. It's like watching someone fill in a sketch with color for me, so I'm sure it's the same for others.
[ Though naturally, it's his choice. Dazai isn't here to push either way, and he can only speak to his own thoughts. ]
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i think
maybe
i know someone
that would read it first
for me
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When you reach the point where you want to share it with the world, I want to be able to read it.
[ If he does. It's not like Dazai is going to judge either way, but there's no sense in thinking of it that way. Write, rewrite, refine - that's how talent is in any field. ]
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if he helps me
edit it
then once its better
i
can show it to you
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I'll be looking forward to it.
[ Though he really doesn't doubt that it'll be just fine, really. ]
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we should still
get drinks
before then
?
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I want to hear how you like boba tea, and I want to try the tea named after you. I won't try it until I see you again, so we have to make it happen soon!
[ It's just more fun that way. ]
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whenever you want to
i don't usually
have any plans