[Sunny thinks about it. The first person who comes to mind is Aubrey, but...as honest as she is, Sunny thinks she'd probably be biased. Xie Lian would be the same way. If there's anyone he can think of who would give him honest critique above anything else, it would have to be Mr. Erwin...]
i think maybe i know someone that would read it first for me
If you decide to show it to them, let me know. I'd like to hear how it goes. I'd like to hear about your progress.
When you reach the point where you want to share it with the world, I want to be able to read it.
[ If he does. It's not like Dazai is going to judge either way, but there's no sense in thinking of it that way. Write, rewrite, refine - that's how talent is in any field. ]
We should. Your writing can take as long as you need, but our meeting cannot!
I want to hear how you like boba tea, and I want to try the tea named after you. I won't try it until I see you again, so we have to make it happen soon!
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i think
maybe
i know someone
that would read it first
for me
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When you reach the point where you want to share it with the world, I want to be able to read it.
[ If he does. It's not like Dazai is going to judge either way, but there's no sense in thinking of it that way. Write, rewrite, refine - that's how talent is in any field. ]
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if he helps me
edit it
then once its better
i
can show it to you
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I'll be looking forward to it.
[ Though he really doesn't doubt that it'll be just fine, really. ]
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we should still
get drinks
before then
?
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I want to hear how you like boba tea, and I want to try the tea named after you. I won't try it until I see you again, so we have to make it happen soon!
[ It's just more fun that way. ]
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whenever you want to
i don't usually
have any plans